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Post by (Amaranthine) on Jan 1, 2005 21:11:52 GMT -5
"I search" {©Amaranthine}
I search For angels In the stars Silently I cry My anguish Echoed To the moon I write With ashes and tears A plea As Poetry A moment Possessed By cold And Fear My heart hollow A cauldron Of wasted dreams I search For angels I search... ...I search... ...For sunlight
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dayna
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I might spend some time downstairs. ~The Incredible String Band~
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Post by dayna on Jan 3, 2005 20:14:35 GMT -5
this has a certain dark prettiness, my kind of poem!! I like the form, it has a reading on quality
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Post by Deleted on Jan 10, 2005 16:10:57 GMT -5
You always do so well with this thing heh, anyhow, another good'en.
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Post by Waves of Love on Jan 10, 2005 16:42:29 GMT -5
it's serene in a grim kind of way...
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Post by ॐ Hemz ॐ on Jan 18, 2005 12:10:35 GMT -5
I liked the minimalist style of this poem.
"A cauldron of wasted dreams"
Nice.
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Post by firefly501 on May 2, 2005 19:53:45 GMT -5
Wow! Well expressed. Great read.
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