Diamond
Established Muse
Forever lost in the Imagination.
Posts: 163
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Post by Diamond on Jan 25, 2005 4:12:52 GMT -5
((I cheated a bit and added a few words of my own. Hope that's okay.))
I shone myself of fears Passion, desire, freedom Free to blossom, free to dream Choking on my tears
I battle quiet joy Anguish, death, plead Plea of truth, plea of soul Begging to annoy
I strip myself of worth Silence, echoes, haunts Haunted breath, haunted smiles Buried in the earth
I sprinkle myself with tar Ash, rubble, waste Wasted existence, wasted will Inhaling moonlight scars
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Post by mysticmoon on Jan 25, 2005 5:03:23 GMT -5
I absolutely love the title. ^_^ The poem is just as wonderful, too. Very nice work. I've never actually played around with the drops of poetry machine. (scampers away to go try)
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Diamond
Established Muse
Forever lost in the Imagination.
Posts: 163
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Post by Diamond on Jan 25, 2005 8:16:23 GMT -5
Thanks! And yes, the Drops of Poetry machine didn't sound all that appealing to me but oddly enough I found the idea of staring at piles of words extremely inspiring. About twenty poems immediately bombarded my head and I had to quickly grab them, hold them down and sort them out before writing. It's a great way to write a poem!
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Post by Rose of the Forgotten on Feb 17, 2005 2:51:02 GMT -5
Great job Dia!! This was absolutely amazing!
I should play around with this, if it's truly as inspiring as you say. Mabye it'll make my muse come back...he's been mysteriously absent...-Scampers off-
-- Jus
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Post by Breathe *alive* on Feb 17, 2005 13:40:19 GMT -5
Absolutely beautiful. I cheat a little too, but that's okay. It's all good! No one will try to obscure your creativity. ;D
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Post by (Amaranthine) on Mar 6, 2005 4:33:07 GMT -5
I love it. I never added words to the given ones, but yours really works. I like your format too.
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