lithic
Wandering Muse
A butterfly makes the broken wind whole with a push of its wings.
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Feb 10, 2005 9:04:32 GMT -5
Post by lithic on Feb 10, 2005 9:04:32 GMT -5
Secrets
Each begged secret lingers naked in diamond dreams dividing truths in the hollow of a poets soul.
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Feb 22, 2005 22:52:23 GMT -5
Post by Rose of the Forgotten on Feb 22, 2005 22:52:23 GMT -5
Great figurative language. I loved this poem.
-- Jus
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Mar 7, 2005 11:46:19 GMT -5
Post by Deleted on Mar 7, 2005 11:46:19 GMT -5
Awesome lit. I like the line Forgotten pointed out as well.
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Jul 24, 2006 15:29:56 GMT -5
Post by *Whisper* on Jul 24, 2006 15:29:56 GMT -5
I love the last line here. Great job!
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