M.R. Inkless
Established Muse
And dawn discovered her there, beneath the cedar's stare.
Posts: 394
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Post by M.R. Inkless on Feb 13, 2005 0:21:32 GMT -5
thoughts blossom with truths draped in white and sprinkled in black your smile, like a broom brushing away the dark
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Post by Rose of the Forgotten on Feb 22, 2005 22:55:50 GMT -5
Aww, this was so sweet. Amazing how that one person's smile can make it all seem better, hmm?
-- Jus
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Post by shadowfox on Feb 23, 2005 21:18:07 GMT -5
Nice. I like this alot. Good work.
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Post by Nightmare *far from home* on Feb 24, 2005 14:08:42 GMT -5
I liked this all about someone making you smile i am like that with someone as well, all in all exelent write short and to the point loved it
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M.R. Inkless
Established Muse
And dawn discovered her there, beneath the cedar's stare.
Posts: 394
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Post by M.R. Inkless on Feb 25, 2005 16:30:57 GMT -5
i know, some people, its just like, you look at them and everything else melts away. thank you all for your comments, im really glad to get positive feedback. especially on such a close-to-my-heart topic.
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Post by firefly501 on May 2, 2005 18:57:57 GMT -5
I really enjoyed this --- there was a wonderful flow to it. The imagery was also good.
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