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My Poet
Feb 16, 2005 10:13:27 GMT -5
Post by Breathe *alive* on Feb 16, 2005 10:13:27 GMT -5
My passion recoiled, I saw a poet Who dared to consume my art The anguish I felt Was too much to tell But I see that poet now Through new eyes Eyes that divide, as they meet mine And now I write of this poet And I cry with a waste of sad tears My angel possesses me now And I can't look up to his scars As he writes the poem of me, And hands me the rose We will be apart for the season, But I will live fully, Without the sadness I felt before I met my poet.
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My Poet
Feb 22, 2005 22:56:47 GMT -5
Post by Rose of the Forgotten on Feb 22, 2005 22:56:47 GMT -5
This was breathtaking, especially considering you used the little word bank! Great job, I loved reading it.
-- Jus
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My Poet
Feb 23, 2005 9:58:55 GMT -5
Post by Breathe *alive* on Feb 23, 2005 9:58:55 GMT -5
I thanks you again, Jus! At least someone liked it. It's been on here for forever. I felt so unloved for a while there. Thank you for rekindling my spark of acceptance! ;D
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My Poet
Feb 24, 2005 14:10:37 GMT -5
Post by Nightmare *far from home* on Feb 24, 2005 14:10:37 GMT -5
getting a vibe that I'm liking from this keep it up bundi
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My Poet
Feb 24, 2005 16:05:48 GMT -5
Post by Breathe *alive* on Feb 24, 2005 16:05:48 GMT -5
Well, thank you, my friend. Seeing as though I've never in my life fallen in love with a poet, so I don't really know why I felt the urge to write about it...
Oh, well!
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My Poet
Apr 28, 2005 22:16:04 GMT -5
Post by firefly501 on Apr 28, 2005 22:16:04 GMT -5
Loved this --- maybe the poet is yourself. Keep them coming!!
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My Poet
Jul 11, 2005 19:26:56 GMT -5
Post by Breathe *alive* on Jul 11, 2005 19:26:56 GMT -5
I will...maybe! Thanks for reading!
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