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Post by rainystreet on May 31, 2005 4:40:08 GMT -5
smiles of peace tears of war can you write and rhyme the beautiful struggle of life can you attain the moment each breath you feel freedom as words slip off your tongue your soul sings forever young...
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blackpetal
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Hello! I hope you enjoy my poetry and please post messages!! Thank you =)
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Post by blackpetal on May 31, 2005 6:49:19 GMT -5
nice poem ;D very normal compared to my stuff, what a wonderful change!! ahh young and normal beautiful just beautiful keep up the good work
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Post by Rose of the Forgotten on Jun 12, 2005 22:39:36 GMT -5
rainystreet, Very nice ending. Good job, a very refreshing piece for some reasong.
-- Jus
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Post by Deleted on Jun 13, 2005 11:39:12 GMT -5
Very nicely put together rainy. Enjoyed this.
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