Hades
Wandering Muse
We don't see things as they are, we see them as we are. -- Anais Nin
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ghosts
Feb 28, 2005 16:29:03 GMT -5
Post by Hades on Feb 28, 2005 16:29:03 GMT -5
I exist apart from the world But I dream hollow, deadly desires My eyes see huanted fears I exhale warm sunlight inhale frigid earth embrace glorious anguish and myself will be silently consumed as the ghosts lay buried in my soul
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ghosts
Mar 1, 2005 0:48:45 GMT -5
Post by dlebrtstrngr on Mar 1, 2005 0:48:45 GMT -5
I am--; but I am not.
That which is seen in the moonlight full and invisible by day. Experienced in a dying dream in the stagger and in the sway. Reality a horrifying nightmare you see when your eyes are closed. Being too far away to be touched by you while we're wearing the very same clothes.
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ghosts
Mar 6, 2005 4:39:44 GMT -5
Post by (Amaranthine) on Mar 6, 2005 4:39:44 GMT -5
great use of the given words
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ghosts
Mar 7, 2005 11:55:45 GMT -5
Post by Deleted on Mar 7, 2005 11:55:45 GMT -5
and myself will be silently consumed as the ghosts lay buried in my soul
Really like those last few ending lines. Nice one hade.
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Hades
Wandering Muse
We don't see things as they are, we see them as we are. -- Anais Nin
Posts: 34
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ghosts
Mar 7, 2005 23:05:54 GMT -5
Post by Hades on Mar 7, 2005 23:05:54 GMT -5
Thanx for the comments. I'm having great fun doing DOPs.
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ghosts
Apr 28, 2005 19:59:58 GMT -5
Post by firefly501 on Apr 28, 2005 19:59:58 GMT -5
Really enjoyed this -- it was one of the most poweful that I have read yet.
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