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Post by nester66 ~poetaster~ on Mar 20, 2005 21:56:07 GMT -5
My world of poverty is gray And your eyes are hollow blue I exist in fridgid snow Ashes, the sunlight that is you
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Post by Breathe *alive* on Mar 29, 2005 21:50:20 GMT -5
Short and sweet. I liked the rhyme. It's always kinda difficult to rhyme with these. I know I lose track of where I'm going with mine; just picking random words and hope that they make sense at least a little...
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Post by dlebrtstrngr on Mar 31, 2005 0:47:56 GMT -5
Hey,
Liked it.
Until...
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Post by Rose of the Forgotten on Apr 1, 2005 1:55:26 GMT -5
I loved it, just the concept in itself was good to me. Nice work Nester
-- Jus
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