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Post by LaChicaMorada on Apr 17, 2005 17:58:17 GMT -5
rhyming passion stones strewn our deadly smiles choke the blossom desire a diamond in the cold
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Post by Rose of the Forgotten on Apr 18, 2005 1:08:44 GMT -5
LaChicaMorada, Very nice work on this. I loved the imagery in the last four lines.
-- Jus
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Post by LaChicaMorada on Apr 19, 2005 18:13:21 GMT -5
Thankyou ;D
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Post by *Whisper* on Jul 24, 2006 15:22:26 GMT -5
Love it! Short and sweet and great imagery!
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