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mariah
May 10, 2005 17:53:16 GMT -5
Post by kate16 on May 10, 2005 17:53:16 GMT -5
Flying Floating Whisping and drifting. The trees sway to its sweet music, as it twists, turns, and entangles their branches. The crickets sing to it on warm summer nights, and the lone wolf howls to it, with an icy breath in winter. Frozen in time you may seem; watching the clouds enlessly dance. They dance like ocean waves; a silent waltz of angels in the sky.
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mariah
May 17, 2005 0:53:58 GMT -5
Post by Rose of the Forgotten on May 17, 2005 0:53:58 GMT -5
kate16, Seems like this was more inspired by Drops of Poetry rather than actually written with it. Still have some lovely imagery though.
-- Jus
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mariah
Jun 13, 2005 11:33:44 GMT -5
Post by Deleted on Jun 13, 2005 11:33:44 GMT -5
Agreed with ROTF but a very nice job. Enjoyed the read.
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mariah
Jul 24, 2006 15:19:11 GMT -5
Post by *Whisper* on Jul 24, 2006 15:19:11 GMT -5
This is beautiful and has a great flow!
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