blackpetal
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Hello! I hope you enjoy my poetry and please post messages!! Thank you =)
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Post by blackpetal on May 31, 2005 6:45:38 GMT -5
Take a look at two more poems I've done Feel free to comment or insult them however you wish my dear butterfly friends! Ahh I love being normal, here they are The Sailor And The Siren
His Dark And Lustrous Wintry Appeal Behind Her Fiery Eyes Concealed Contagious Was Their Moonlit Romance Designed With A Unique Faith In Chance
And He Would Her Enchant With Bitter Lust Left Scented On Her With Ancient Trust Her Dark And Piercing Delicate Touch Only Once Would They Ever Entwine Through Lust... [/color] My Canals Are Pretty And Red
Let The Rivers Of Red Blood Blossom The Feel Of It Gushing Gives Me Some Kind of Sick Ecstasy. Let It Run
Let Me Awaken In My Red Chamber Bed My Naked Temple Cold, Heavy Like Lead Oh Let Me Awaken Dead In My Bed!
My Screams Of Pleasure Torment Your Mind There Are Just Some Things You Could Not Possibly Find Normal or Defined. God Made You Blind
I’ll make Your Rivers Die I’ll Torment Your God Defected Mind To Watch You Bleed Would Be A Pleasure! I Watched You Run, I Watched You Run… [/color] By Wabbit Mistress xenawarrior997@hotmail.com
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Post by Rose of the Forgotten on Jun 12, 2005 22:38:41 GMT -5
blackpetal, Very dark... well written, considering your resources, but dark! I liked the way you made them flow. Good job.
-- Jus
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Post by Deleted on Jun 13, 2005 11:36:37 GMT -5
Very nice work BP, shows you spent quite some time on these. Enjoyed.
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Post by *Whisper* on Jul 24, 2006 15:15:53 GMT -5
Very great work here; I love the feelings and the imagery produced by both!
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