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Post by waterlily07 on Jun 2, 2005 16:14:52 GMT -5
Lines divide nothing Liberty and freedom will follow. Flags silently embrace marble stones New dreams blossom...
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Post by Llybian on Jun 12, 2005 19:29:56 GMT -5
Love the ending line ^^ Great job!
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Post by Rose of the Forgotten on Jun 12, 2005 22:53:46 GMT -5
waterlily07, Good. I liked it. Very creative. ^_^
-- Jus
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Post by Deleted on Jun 13, 2005 12:06:54 GMT -5
Kinda reminds me of memorial day, nice work waterlily.
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Post by waterlily07 on Jun 15, 2005 21:54:45 GMT -5
Thanks Llybian, ROTF, and DOR.
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Post by bludragonfly on Jun 30, 2005 21:15:09 GMT -5
I really like this one- So much meaning in so few words, Nice work!
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Post by waterlily07 on Jul 5, 2005 15:08:13 GMT -5
Thanks, bludragonfly.
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Post by [O]ne[R]eason[2] on Oct 14, 2005 12:50:18 GMT -5
There's so much to read between the lines here. No problem though, since I always come up with my own conclusions in the end!
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Post by Elf(...drowning in tears...) on Oct 29, 2005 14:41:34 GMT -5
Very short,but with a powerfull meaning!
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Post by lauramaet2007 on Nov 10, 2005 17:52:36 GMT -5
When you can get this much meaning out of 4 lines and 16 words you know that you are a poet, this is something i'm yet to be able to do...Good write, keep it up. -Laura Mae
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