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Post by knd12492 on Jun 12, 2005 17:32:50 GMT -5
I wish to tell you my secret that holds me hostage. I want you to understand, but I doubt you can. I see the pain she will cause you. I am so confused I am breaking down I hope it won't happen in front of you But it is a time bomb i can't control
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Post by Rose of the Forgotten on Jun 12, 2005 22:49:36 GMT -5
knd12492, Strong ending. Good job.
-- Jus
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Post by Deleted on Jun 13, 2005 11:53:34 GMT -5
There comes a time when you just need to let things out. Enjoyed this.
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Post by knd12492 on Jun 13, 2005 12:32:47 GMT -5
thanx I appreciate your comments
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