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Post by incubuspoeticdude on Jun 26, 2005 1:19:19 GMT -5
The very tears you spill can quiet your given will to cry cold hollow charm is to feel your warm
I felt the sting These lines are white soft passion That sneak silent smiles Watch while you sing
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Post by bludragonfly on Jun 30, 2005 21:05:32 GMT -5
Very Profound. I love it!
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Post by Rose of the Forgotten on Jul 6, 2005 1:01:05 GMT -5
incubuspoeticdude, Loved the way you closed this out. Very nice.
-- Jus
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Post by queenjellybean on Oct 23, 2005 16:10:37 GMT -5
i agree, wonderful job!!
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Post by Lyca on Oct 24, 2005 8:21:45 GMT -5
nice use of words.... good job ;D
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Post by ॐ Hemz ॐ on Nov 16, 2005 17:22:03 GMT -5
A fine drop of poetry with much depth. Bravo!
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