sakral
Wandering Muse
Posts: 61
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Post by sakral on Jul 3, 2005 3:42:14 GMT -5
Battle against the years
Some soldiers dare to open doors firing riffles shattering windows ever doing battle in the streets of Paris burning and in anguish remember though, all strong men soften in the twilight of years
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Post by waterlily07 on Jul 5, 2005 15:05:30 GMT -5
I like the transition in the ages, sakral. Nice one.
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Post by Rose of the Forgotten on Jul 6, 2005 1:07:30 GMT -5
sakral, No one stays strong forever. Good work with this!
-- Jus
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Post by *Whisper* on Jul 24, 2006 15:12:46 GMT -5
I like how it goes really strong and then it softens. Nice work!
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