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Post by Gothinius on Aug 24, 2005 16:10:26 GMT -5
I added alot of words that I couldn't find on there. . .anyway. A political one, of course. Enjoy.
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Lady Blossom in nails and ashes.
Lady Orchid dulls the gray Poverty of battle glory taste. Silent flags laugh liberty But drink to a country buried in Dead, strewn over frigid smiles For the world to see dreams Dashing dreams and Sunlight sting the thief.
Lady Blossom frees the hollow.
Lady Daffodil chokes the strong and Lingers her wrath over America's recoiled Justice. Echo the girl whose anguish Pleads for relief from this mediocre freedom. Fell the marble statuesque angel, Beholding her own beauty. Vain and furious to consume her pride She strains to silence the power of Each soul wrecking their own kind of havoc in Their hypocritically pacafistic violence. Choke the quiet, please your Scars. Soften each secret - Each is own. Each is selfish reason.
Lady Blossom, fade away to coddle her murd'rous demons.
Lady Lily, dare not to move our anthem of lies, Lest you wither to every season.
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Sardonic Sadism
Wandering Muse
"Only in sleep do I find any respite from the world."
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Post by Sardonic Sadism on Aug 25, 2005 18:48:00 GMT -5
Wow!
That was darkly beautiful and very, very unique in terms of what I have read in the past in terms of political poetry. Extremely powerful, amazing usage of imagery...
I read this and started falling into that delirious and fragmented flow. Great poem.
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Post by louve on Sept 3, 2005 22:47:43 GMT -5
Wonderfully imaginative and creative!
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Post by Elf(...drowning in tears...) on Sept 20, 2005 4:50:29 GMT -5
Extremly creative and the idea is fabulous!I liked the last two lines best
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