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Post by Dramamine Dreams on Jul 10, 2006 20:30:39 GMT -5
Hollow desires, softness recoiled
I embrace my anguish
orchids blossom silently
death smiles softly
faces become stone
I cry this is pretty much utter nonsense but I actually kind of like it
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Post by - Moirae - on Jul 11, 2006 19:12:15 GMT -5
it seems all chopped up and yet flowed at the same time...interesting....well i like it too!
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Post by Dramamine Dreams on Jul 11, 2006 19:39:13 GMT -5
I agree with you on that point.. it does seem very chopped but somehow retains some resemblance of a flow.. not bad really for just picking random words I think
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Post by - Moirae - on Jul 11, 2006 20:06:24 GMT -5
not bad at all
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leta swan
Established Muse
pain is inspiration, you'll never break me.
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Post by leta swan on Jul 20, 2006 12:17:48 GMT -5
i like this too. sometimes your heads on the CHOPPING block then the blood FLOWS
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