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Post by Don Quixote on Oct 24, 2005 10:00:05 GMT -5
The girl inhaled sunlight
and exhaled the Paris moon
with strewn blue tears
at a naked marble grave
in her secret dreams
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Post by lauramaet2007 on Nov 10, 2005 17:55:56 GMT -5
I like this poem, even though I probably interpreted it differently than it was intended to be interpreted, good write, keep it up. -Laura Mae
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Post by mercywraith on Feb 21, 2006 9:27:30 GMT -5
Aah to ponder what it is that others think and feel in thier secret dreams! I think its something rather sacred that we reach if we can awaken this and reciprocate the opening to another within ourselves. What would it be like to actualy feel the passions of another as they do, if we could read thier feelings and mind? Would we be able to handle all the bad stuff we saw too?
Thought provoking read. Thanks for sharing it!
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Dulcinea
Established Muse
I love you brave hero, your Dulcinea.
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Post by Dulcinea on Feb 21, 2006 20:25:15 GMT -5
Lovely Dear Joe, beautiful.
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Post by Patience on Jul 8, 2006 19:12:38 GMT -5
WOW, sensational ! Patience
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