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Post by ॐ Hemz ॐ on Nov 16, 2005 17:54:05 GMT -5
A delicious softness for a moment. I think! Poets write in search of liberty not glory. Vanilla bunny. Diamond city. Dream my free eyes. Nothing scars the strong heart. I grow. Truth met with the muggy new age.
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Post by maeganluv on Nov 20, 2005 5:37:17 GMT -5
to me a good poem is one were the reader can relate to or infuse , With yours I was very much yes, yes I see, thank you it was great
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Post by ॐ Hemz ॐ on Nov 21, 2005 3:21:04 GMT -5
Thank you for the positive feedback!
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Post by Ophelia? on Nov 24, 2005 9:34:27 GMT -5
Me liked. Especially "Dream my free eyes", and "Nothing scars the strong heart". Very hopeful poem.
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Post by waterlily07 on Dec 11, 2005 13:46:46 GMT -5
I like this one. We all dream of that diamond city. This piece reminded me of The Great Gatsby. Most likely because my high school English teacher was so fascinated by it.
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