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Post by knd12492 on Dec 1, 2005 23:02:46 GMT -5
You’re just like the others Pretending im not there A shadow in the background Embarrassed to call me your friend You’re drifting away and sometimes I don’t care You’re blind to the power you have over me Through my barrier you have slipped You got to my protected heart Now you have the power to bring me to my knees
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Post by knd12492 on Dec 11, 2005 22:31:34 GMT -5
is it that bad?
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Post by - Moirae - on Jul 9, 2006 12:45:20 GMT -5
you expressed the emotion very well throughout this work
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Post by Rose of the Forgotten on Jul 21, 2006 2:19:39 GMT -5
knd, There was nothing bad about this. Often, trusting someone too much can result in this kind of emotion. Good job.
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