luks
Wandering Muse
Posts: 72
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poem 2
Dec 4, 2005 9:45:06 GMT -5
Post by luks on Dec 4, 2005 9:45:06 GMT -5
girl is a naked laugh Paris diamond gray delicious danced for a season thief
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Jul 9, 2006 12:46:08 GMT -5
Post by - Moirae - on Jul 9, 2006 12:46:08 GMT -5
interesting work here...leaves a lot to the readers imagination
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Jul 21, 2006 2:20:50 GMT -5
Post by Rose of the Forgotten on Jul 21, 2006 2:20:50 GMT -5
luks, The opening line definitely hooks in the reader. Good job.
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Jul 24, 2006 15:06:41 GMT -5
Post by *Whisper* on Jul 24, 2006 15:06:41 GMT -5
Hmm.. made me think a lot; nice imagery!
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