lili
Wandering Muse
Don't judge my love for Pink. Judge my love for life
Posts: 24
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Post by lili on Jan 26, 2006 15:28:21 GMT -5
Your a horrible thing Awful to the core Your desire for life is ruthless Because of You When I smiled, It stings You can make the most beautiful, blossoming orchid Grow gray Your a thief of my sunlight You can bring an angel to tears, And leave scars everywhere you go You make the snow colder that it is And nothing can grow You are misereable You are death.....
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Post by waterlily07 on Jan 30, 2006 17:52:14 GMT -5
Oh I loved the lines: Nice job, lili.
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Post by ॐ Hemz ॐ on Feb 4, 2006 5:23:49 GMT -5
The sheer majesty of this write blew me away. Loved this. Well done!
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Post by Elf(...drowning in tears...) on Feb 16, 2006 6:23:54 GMT -5
A wonderefull poem
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Post by mercywraith on Feb 18, 2006 23:14:15 GMT -5
Marveloud word play, great fluidity.
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