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Post by operigoso on Jun 6, 2006 11:28:16 GMT -5
Fully naked- a moment of battle with the earth. Strewn sunlight summer our rhyme- inhaled. echo. laid furious. embrace it hollow (girl) that dignity fell thief to freedom.
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Post by - Moirae - on Jul 9, 2006 12:07:58 GMT -5
wonderful work
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Post by Rose of the Forgotten on Jul 21, 2006 2:15:17 GMT -5
operigoso, Extremely powerful ending. Great job, really, loved your word choice.
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Post by *Whisper* on Jul 24, 2006 15:07:15 GMT -5
I love the language you used in this. Nice job!
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