dmb825
Established Muse
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Post by dmb825 on Jun 9, 2006 10:07:45 GMT -5
Come embrace our freedom. Silently pure. Delicious in taste. Hollow dreams of death. Free will scars a haunted and quiet city. Naked anguish for a furious angel Echo and linger in secret.
The title's meaning refers to both the length of the piece and it describes what the poem is talking about.
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Post by lifeart on Jun 27, 2006 14:51:09 GMT -5
I like the first 4 lines and the last line, but the other two, kind of confuse me....godo job anyway though!
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Post by lifeart on Jun 27, 2006 14:51:49 GMT -5
Wait, nevermind, after rereading it, I totally understand it, I was jsut reading it wrong!! Goodjob!
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Post by - Moirae - on Jul 9, 2006 12:03:19 GMT -5
piercing message and excellent word useage....great work!
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