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TRUTH
Jul 4, 2006 1:56:55 GMT -5
Post by jeremychristopher on Jul 4, 2006 1:56:55 GMT -5
Negative situations inspire negative minds So we think negative rhymes And throw them down without giving it time Cuz in time we can realize that there is a greater TRUTH Than all of the negative aspects of our youth And the truth has a name
Come take a journey with me and the TRUTH Just close your eyes And open your mind That's all you gotta do The TRUTH can cleanse you mind Release your stress Curtail all of your worries And rid you of your mess The TRUTH says give it all to me I'll take it Your pain, oppression and misery And the TRUTH has a name
The TRUTH will allow you to smile And love your greatest foe The TRUTH will eleviate your trials Like you don't even know No more will you poetry reflect you anguish and pain Because the TRUTH is so perfect AND JESUS is TRUTH's name
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Jul 9, 2006 11:59:21 GMT -5
Post by - Moirae - on Jul 9, 2006 11:59:21 GMT -5
very powerful work!! lots of powerful lines and honesty...great work
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Jul 24, 2006 15:10:23 GMT -5
Post by *Whisper* on Jul 24, 2006 15:10:23 GMT -5
Interesting.... powerful... Great work!!!
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Sept 4, 2006 20:25:38 GMT -5
Post by jeremychristopher on Sept 4, 2006 20:25:38 GMT -5
Thank you all for your comments on this. This is one of my first and favorite pieces!...J
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codaly212
Wandering Muse
?Beauty without virtue is like a rose without scent.? - Book of Proverbs
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TRUTH
Sept 26, 2006 2:39:43 GMT -5
Post by codaly212 on Sept 26, 2006 2:39:43 GMT -5
This is very good. I love that you put your faith into this poem. This reminded me of 2 Samuel 22, which is one of my favorite pasages. I love that you are exalting Him among the nations. God bless, and keep writing!
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