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Jul 12, 2006 7:00:35 GMT -5
Post by delunalore on Jul 12, 2006 7:00:35 GMT -5
moon motion melt
stars apart
new of nothing,
laid sunlight
for, the world in'a moment
was the earth exhaled .
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Jul 13, 2006 13:00:13 GMT -5
Post by lifeart on Jul 13, 2006 13:00:13 GMT -5
wow, cool write! I like the end stanza!!
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Jul 19, 2006 15:56:08 GMT -5
Post by delunalore on Jul 19, 2006 15:56:08 GMT -5
Lifeart,
Man, I think it really is all about the last stanza too !
glad you like it Deluna
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Jul 20, 2006 17:35:41 GMT -5
Post by - Moirae - on Jul 20, 2006 17:35:41 GMT -5
really unique and good use of the program..
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