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Post by mellowyellow on Sept 27, 2006 19:41:23 GMT -5
Made this in Drops of Poetry, but I can't post it in that forum for some reason.
Vanilla dove, can your tears enchant diamond smiles
inhaled in suunlight ashes?
I breathe the snow that is exhaled.
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Post by ravenfreebyrd on Sept 27, 2006 21:05:04 GMT -5
what a beautiful combination of words... gorgeous really... Raven
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Post by bcoyotey on Sept 28, 2006 19:32:13 GMT -5
mellowyellow, (I love that song) The imagery in this is breathtaking. Wonderful wording! Lady B
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Post by - Moirae - on Sept 28, 2006 20:02:16 GMT -5
excellent use of DOP..and this is the correct place to post this...beautiful work
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Post by mellowyellow on Sept 29, 2006 5:50:00 GMT -5
Thank you for all the ego-stroking comments
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Post by lifeart on Oct 5, 2006 21:42:41 GMT -5
beautiful
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