Hades
Wandering Muse
We don't see things as they are, we see them as we are. -- Anais Nin
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Post by Hades on Nov 5, 2006 23:23:33 GMT -5
Cold sunlight bare my eyes to diamond dreams buried by marbled cities
Simmering moonlight haunt my heart of passionate art dulled by foaming espresso cups
Frigid sunlight charm my fears with hollow joys echoed by battling countries
Furious moonlight possess my soul with earthly rhymes exhaled by poet's enchanting breaths
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andiknewit
Wandering Muse
"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars" - Oscar Wilde
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Post by andiknewit on Nov 10, 2006 15:21:52 GMT -5
I love the line "Frigid sunlight charm my fears" - to me, that expresses a state of mind I go through often; allowing the sight of something 'pretty' or 'shiny' to blind me to greater troubles. We're isolated and insulated here - it's not something we should forget. I don't know if that's the message you were trying to send, but it's what your writing said to me, so thanks for the reminder.
As for a title, how about 'London'?
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Post by waterlily07 on Nov 17, 2006 16:50:20 GMT -5
It so Picasso-like. Random images all held together. From sunlight to coffee to dreams and imagination. Maybe Picasso...it's just a thought for the title. Well done, hadesrex. ~waterlily07~
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Post by - Moirae - on Nov 22, 2006 22:11:12 GMT -5
wonderful DOP poem..i enjoyed it a lot and nice title
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Hades
Wandering Muse
We don't see things as they are, we see them as we are. -- Anais Nin
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Post by Hades on Nov 26, 2006 14:26:08 GMT -5
thanks
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