Hades
Wandering Muse
We don't see things as they are, we see them as we are. -- Anais Nin
Posts: 34
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Terror
Nov 26, 2006 14:38:01 GMT -5
Post by Hades on Nov 26, 2006 14:38:01 GMT -5
Powerful image mesmerize the world Burning sea of ashes blossom through the night Hollow comfort pouring from strangers Listening to innocent cries of God's nation
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Terror
Nov 27, 2006 17:44:34 GMT -5
Post by bluefootgroup on Nov 27, 2006 17:44:34 GMT -5
Wow, your poem fits together really well. Powerful imagery and a message of bitterness and innocence lost. Really nice work.
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Terror
Nov 28, 2006 18:19:41 GMT -5
Post by waterlily07 on Nov 28, 2006 18:19:41 GMT -5
Stunning imagery, hadesrex. The pain and the sadness resonates in each line. Nice job.
~waterlily07~
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Terror
Dec 7, 2006 0:00:57 GMT -5
Post by - Moirae - on Dec 7, 2006 0:00:57 GMT -5
very interesting use of DOP
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Hades
Wandering Muse
We don't see things as they are, we see them as we are. -- Anais Nin
Posts: 34
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Terror
Dec 7, 2006 19:54:52 GMT -5
Post by Hades on Dec 7, 2006 19:54:52 GMT -5
Thanks for the comments. If only we could stop all the war, madness and terror. It would make for a nice Christmas present.
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