luks
Wandering Muse
Posts: 72
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Post by luks on Jul 11, 2007 8:41:54 GMT -5
nature of nature
snow speaks to the park grass is relaxing
moment of melting is needed then
Spring will come with burning baskets of May scent and sun (warm stranger) will hop through benches and people
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Post by inflames on Aug 12, 2007 0:00:13 GMT -5
I can almost smell it. I thought this was very good.
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Post by bcoyotey on Aug 16, 2007 20:22:02 GMT -5
luks, I think you have found your niche! Spring will come with burning baskets of May scent and sun (warm stranger) will hop through benches and people Fantastic imagery. Lady B
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Post by xaimai on Aug 18, 2007 11:22:09 GMT -5
that was terrific imagery, a truly delightful read, great work!
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