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Post by lifeart on Feb 15, 2007 19:37:34 GMT -5
Pouring white rain, borrowed from the sea. Nature in beatutiful meloncholy. I, mesmerized and carefree, melt in the moment, perfectly.
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Post by lucretia on Feb 15, 2007 22:09:42 GMT -5
So dreamy.
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Post by bcoyotey on Feb 15, 2007 23:06:14 GMT -5
lifeart, stunning short piece. Take care, lady B
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Post by waterlily07 on Feb 19, 2007 20:35:56 GMT -5
This has an uplifting spirit in this poem of yours, lifeart. Kudos! The rain can do wonders to the soul. waterlily07
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Post by mywar on Feb 20, 2007 3:09:19 GMT -5
dreamy & beautiful.
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Post by lifeart on Feb 26, 2007 18:18:21 GMT -5
Thank you all! I love the rain, I hope that was conveyed(sp?) here.
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mathtears
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Post by mathtears on Apr 6, 2007 7:50:41 GMT -5
Really nice words you used there, they create such a nice atmosphere. Very nicely done ! x
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Post by NewfieSusan18 on Apr 17, 2007 11:46:38 GMT -5
Absolutely georgeous!!!
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Post by dschieber on Apr 17, 2007 18:12:33 GMT -5
nice piece the flow is great and the imagery is awesome
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