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Post by ~IV~ Drip Drip Dying on Feb 17, 2007 13:31:10 GMT -5
I Breath Freedom I rain Dust, a wish of stones An angels love and passionate candle stands My world is like a child in a park His letter has Warmth I remember His Flame of ice began to melt At Lily’s grave
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Post by bcoyotey on Feb 18, 2007 23:05:58 GMT -5
Ivy, Fantastic open-mic. Short & poignant. Take care, Lady B
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Post by waterlily07 on Feb 19, 2007 20:33:13 GMT -5
There's a tale behind every line. Well done, ivy81!!! Welcome to TPS and welcome aboard as a mod.
waterlily07
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Post by mywar on Feb 20, 2007 3:10:52 GMT -5
I love this, especially the line: "rain Dust, a wish of stones", I'll be tracking down some of your other work me thinks.
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bitter0irony
Established Muse
From even the greatest of horrors, Irony is seldom absent. ~H.P. Lovecraft, "The Shunned House"
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Post by bitter0irony on Feb 25, 2007 12:57:18 GMT -5
Wow! I love the contradictions. Very powerful imagery, nice short lines with a story in every one. I'll be checking out more of your work!
~Bitter Irony
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Post by kattyann on Mar 10, 2007 19:27:47 GMT -5
My favorite
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Misty
Wandering Muse
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Post by Misty on Mar 10, 2007 20:40:49 GMT -5
it seems like a story or something ....like it should have more to it
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Post by ~IV~ Drip Drip Dying on Mar 30, 2007 9:26:22 GMT -5
Thanks For All The Replys *Hugs Everyone* ^^
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mathtears
Established Muse
Not a storybook princess.
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Post by mathtears on Apr 4, 2007 17:13:41 GMT -5
Very cool and very creative. Love it ! x
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