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Post by lyricalturtle on Feb 27, 2007 15:16:54 GMT -5
splashing rain abandon moon a hypnotic fog nature outside puddles at the headlight of cars a innocence night began from the comfort on my couch freckled child gushes listening to a powerful moment of the breath of God brief deer encounter meet his surprise pouring wild pasion his smile is our perfect companion
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Post by mywar on Feb 27, 2007 18:37:57 GMT -5
nicely done.
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Post by - Moirae - on Mar 9, 2007 4:55:24 GMT -5
another DOP beauty...great work!
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Post by bcoyotey on Mar 15, 2007 19:21:10 GMT -5
Welcome lyrical. This is a beautiful DOP poem. Bravo. bc
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Post by waterlily07 on Mar 15, 2007 21:47:24 GMT -5
This piece feels like it shows the night in reverse to me. Cool DOP, lyricalturtle.
waterlily07
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