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Post by incubuspoeticdude on Mar 17, 2007 19:22:59 GMT -5
Come around and I smile
Generous letter speak all I need
Let dust of innocence to sip from Angel Valley
Believing in stories of my old fashioned love
Trance over the blossom of her lips
Linger the door between my heart
Meet me my love, meet my passion
For this love is everlasting
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Post by mywar on Mar 19, 2007 2:43:54 GMT -5
A warm ambience with this piece.
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Post by waterlily07 on Mar 24, 2007 23:49:46 GMT -5
Well penned from the massive list of words, incubus. It does ring the essence of old-fashion romance. Excellent DOP!
waterlily07
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Post by bcoyotey on Mar 25, 2007 12:24:01 GMT -5
incubus, What a beautiful DOP poem.
Believing in stories of my old fashioned love
Trance over the blossom of her lips
Linger the door between my heart
Meet me my love, meet my passion
For this love is everlasting
You make it look a lot easier than it is. Bravo. Lady B
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mathtears
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Not a storybook princess.
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Post by mathtears on Apr 6, 2007 7:49:30 GMT -5
Aww sweet poem. Very nicely done ! x
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dschieber
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tortured for eternity
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Post by dschieber on Apr 14, 2007 8:05:48 GMT -5
well written it paints a pretty picture of love
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Post by NewfieSusan18 on Apr 17, 2007 11:34:04 GMT -5
Very beautiful work. I loved it! Must have taken a while to piece that together! Great job
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