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Post by starrynights206 on May 2, 2007 17:48:43 GMT -5
For Freedom: Our Sacrifice We linger in the ashes of discontent of silent questions in the white image of the world: listening is believing grave hands near a hollow door.
I sip stories of the old valley laked around benches, blue stones, as carefree as a stranger’s gift, fashioned in ribbons of ocean.
We protect the letter: I.
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Post by mywar on May 3, 2007 6:16:55 GMT -5
This is a very different DOP write, a piece I will definetly read again.
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Post by *Whisper* on May 21, 2007 16:31:42 GMT -5
Very nice and well written. It has good imagery also! <3
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Post by elibabel on May 21, 2007 20:23:39 GMT -5
It's off the beaten path I like it I'm not quite sure why but I do. Nice job.
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Post by nirodeth on May 23, 2007 4:20:27 GMT -5
A very well written piece. I love the flow, and emotion. Well done.
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