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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on May 10, 2007 22:48:18 GMT -5
A sweet angel at my door Beautiful is her smile Spring blossoms are her scent A voice like rain Pouring over my innocence She is my sanctuary Protecting my innocence
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Post by ZAINAB on May 13, 2007 9:05:37 GMT -5
This was so sweet Keep writing gal
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Post by mywar on May 13, 2007 22:58:50 GMT -5
So vivid it felt like a film. Love it. I'm exalting you for this one.
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on May 14, 2007 23:07:01 GMT -5
Thanks to you both, especially for the exalt mywar (in the shadows) It was fun to create and nice to know you like it
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Post by elibabel on May 21, 2007 20:25:31 GMT -5
This is a very sweet poem. I really like the imagery.
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on May 21, 2007 21:33:45 GMT -5
Thankyou elibabel
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Post by waterlily07 on May 24, 2007 19:33:50 GMT -5
Much enjoyed read, jahaliel. I just love the feelings this DOP unleashes. Great job! waterlily07
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on May 24, 2007 20:14:27 GMT -5
Thankyou!
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Post by faithful on Aug 25, 2007 10:02:53 GMT -5
that's good, I like it, but just keep moving !!!
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anthema
Established Muse
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Post by anthema on Aug 29, 2007 20:02:13 GMT -5
Lovely poem.
Very naturally flowing, and the words selected all work very well together.
Great work.
Anthema
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