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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on May 29, 2007 19:39:12 GMT -5
Brown robin, white dove The sweet blue flowers blossom Images of Spring --------------------------------------------------------------- A.N. This is a haiku created using DOP, does that make it a dopku? hope you enjoy the poem
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Post by mywar on Jun 1, 2007 19:02:26 GMT -5
Good "Dopku" There are a few "dopkus" if your interested in looking thru the pages...I like your style.
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Jun 3, 2007 19:01:34 GMT -5
i shall check them out thanks for commenting
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Post by nirodeth on Jun 6, 2007 8:04:14 GMT -5
Nice Haiku. The start is a bit less attractive than the 2nd and 3rd sentences though.
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Post by bcoyotey on Aug 16, 2007 20:04:03 GMT -5
Hehe! Beautiful dopku, Jah-jah. Lady B
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