dschieber
Established Muse
tortured for eternity
Posts: 307
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Hallee
Jul 25, 2007 20:44:06 GMT -5
Post by dschieber on Jul 25, 2007 20:44:06 GMT -5
her candle beautifully strong she's a child burning cancer breathing innocence my hypnotic trance melting into a foggy sanctuary I question God
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Hallee
Jul 25, 2007 21:17:07 GMT -5
Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Jul 25, 2007 21:17:07 GMT -5
interesting poem you made. I liked the images you created
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Hallee
Aug 7, 2007 1:36:46 GMT -5
Post by texcymbal on Aug 7, 2007 1:36:46 GMT -5
Nice piece, haunting & moody. Creates an interesting "feel"
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TheRantingThespian
Wandering Muse
The opposite of war isn't peace, it's creation.
Posts: 18
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Hallee
Aug 7, 2007 3:35:13 GMT -5
Post by TheRantingThespian on Aug 7, 2007 3:35:13 GMT -5
my hypnotic trance melting into a foggy sanctuary I question God This part made no sence to me. Maybe I am just stupid rate3
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