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Post by 1 woman, many words on Sept 9, 2007 14:04:28 GMT -5
Delicate sweat melted like skin before night dare returned. moments collecting lush images silent frost poured starts out. His naked voice composed her poetry.
Stubborn days turned away Summer still flirted, Spanish beach swam on her mind Listen, with her poetry flows his voice.
Last dirt trickled down, compassion plagued with reason. A different rain strums, A woman's mind yet a boy's poetry.
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Sept 9, 2007 21:17:11 GMT -5
well done, this was impressive. i loved the way you came with such stunning images.
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Post by bcoyotey on Sept 10, 2007 14:11:01 GMT -5
1 woman, many words, Welcome to the TPS family. A very impressive Drops poem. The imagery and flow were super. Lady B
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anthema
Established Muse
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Post by anthema on Sept 10, 2007 20:22:22 GMT -5
1 woman,
This is pretty impressive.
Interesting flow of thoughts, all anchored together by the references to the poetry.
I particularly liked A different rain strums
Nice DoP write.
Anthema
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Post by 1 woman, many words on Sept 11, 2007 19:41:26 GMT -5
thanks guys!
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