dreamhazer
Established Muse
The yellow ships hung in the air in exactly the way that bricks don't.
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Post by dreamhazer on Sept 24, 2007 17:05:49 GMT -5
The lush boy melted his girl With carefree driving, flirting with her With life changing, crazy sweat.
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Post by bcoyotey on Sept 29, 2007 14:09:38 GMT -5
dreamhazer, Wonderful Drops poem. Vivid imagery. Lady B
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Oct 1, 2007 21:13:04 GMT -5
you did a lot with few words, great drop. thanks for sharing
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Post by Muni [Pondering] on Oct 3, 2007 9:36:59 GMT -5
You said so much in so little. Fantastic write.
Munim.
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