namaea
Wandering Muse
Namaea
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Post by namaea on Oct 3, 2007 15:49:14 GMT -5
the night outside was composed of delicate flower scent that could smell terrible a woman flirted with the naked skin image of crazy Mr.Kipling's 25 hotel stars
a girl would spend days on picnic with boys swam a river flowing muddily silent with dirt stranger still, her driving was crazy the nostalgia changed it to a summer thing
collecting rain vertically for some reason, the boys seem different, stranger, terrible, like Mr. Kipling's 25 hotel stars in a spanish room on the beach
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namaea
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Namaea
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Post by namaea on Oct 3, 2007 15:51:53 GMT -5
Just a footnote, here- working with random words, it seems the outcome is quite funny. I found myself giggling over the inanity of it all. I think this is the strangest poem I have ever written, LOL.
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Post by bcoyotey on Oct 4, 2007 19:10:08 GMT -5
namaea, Lol. I adored it. Great imaginative fun. Lady B
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Oct 4, 2007 19:52:22 GMT -5
this was cool, it brought a smile to my face. i know how interesting using dop is and you've done really well
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namaea
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Namaea
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Post by namaea on Oct 4, 2007 23:55:35 GMT -5
Thanks, Lade B, and Jahjah, I'm still giggling every time I read it- it's rather funny, but that, I think, is what you get when you write a poem of almost utter nonsense. That might be why it strikes my funny-bone so much, because it IS nonsense. I wonder when the next list of words will be out- it was rather fun- I got two poems out of it, and the other one wasn't quite so silly. This was my first attempt with drops of poetry, and the results were almost disasterous! Lol. Thank you both for being supportive
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