namaea
Wandering Muse
Namaea
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Night
Oct 3, 2007 16:41:07 GMT -5
Post by namaea on Oct 3, 2007 16:41:07 GMT -5
night trickled through the window rain flowing down vertically, then the smell of summer flower scent on a blanket
Delicate stars, and a lush voice dare to listen to the meditative guitar, composed, yet care-free, and compassion poured a river and changed all that into silent nostalgia
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Night
Oct 4, 2007 19:11:39 GMT -5
Post by bcoyotey on Oct 4, 2007 19:11:39 GMT -5
namaea, Your becoming quite good at this drop poetry. I love the gentle scented imagery. Lady B
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Night
Oct 4, 2007 19:53:24 GMT -5
Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on Oct 4, 2007 19:53:24 GMT -5
this was really pretty. i loved it
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namaea
Wandering Muse
Namaea
Posts: 86
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Night
Oct 5, 2007 0:12:15 GMT -5
Post by namaea on Oct 5, 2007 0:12:15 GMT -5
Thank you, Lady B, and Jahjah. This was my second attempt at that delectible group of words. I might even have a third go, but I think this one was the best I am going to get out of this particular group, until they add new ones. The truth is, I went reading, and found that someone else had done a remarkable job with the very words I was drawing from myself, and I wondered if I could find anything pretty in that jumble for me to create. In effect, I did it to see if I could. Thanks, again, for your sweet commentary.
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namaea
Wandering Muse
Namaea
Posts: 86
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Night
Oct 5, 2007 0:15:03 GMT -5
Post by namaea on Oct 5, 2007 0:15:03 GMT -5
Oh, a question, if I may- I've been wondering what the karma thing is under my name, and how do you earn karma points? I have 0 so far- apparently I haven't figured it out yet. Lady B has 404, and Jahjah has 38. I am very very curious. ??
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