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Post by violist on Oct 25, 2007 20:20:38 GMT -5
The strangers convene At the summer solstice ball; Lovely balconies.
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Post by Sir Daniel on Oct 26, 2007 18:37:26 GMT -5
Great job, you have created what we will call "haiku drops".. And to do two of them... I wonder, my friend.. are you showing off?? (LOL)
You might have started the latest trend..
Daniel
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Post by violist on Oct 26, 2007 19:02:44 GMT -5
It's easier than writing a full-blown series of verses, I think! So no, I'm not showing off. It just seemed too natural to pass up!
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Post by bcoyotey on Oct 28, 2007 14:58:22 GMT -5
Gorgeous Haiku drops, violist. Applause! Lady B
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namaea
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Post by namaea on Oct 30, 2007 18:11:13 GMT -5
I definitely like it, though I am confused at it, esp. the lovely balconies part, lol. Good work, I am sure it is just my uneducated ignorance confusing me, after all.
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Post by E. on Nov 18, 2007 2:32:03 GMT -5
Oooh, a haiku. Nice.
I also loooove the imagery in this.
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