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Post by violist on Nov 15, 2007 21:12:49 GMT -5
the large stone in the shifting foliage is unseen
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E.
Established Muse
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Post by E. on Nov 18, 2007 2:34:24 GMT -5
This poem gives me goosebumps because it seems to be hinting at something slightly sinister or foreboding. It is amazing that you captured such a strong feeling--whether it was intended or not-- in such a small poem.
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Post by bcoyotey on Nov 18, 2007 14:04:13 GMT -5
Violist, This is lovely. You have become quite talented at this. Lady B
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Post by - Moirae - on Nov 29, 2007 19:25:10 GMT -5
I have to agree with Heere; something quite sinter lurking just under the surface of this poem did put a shiver up my spine too...but I still loved it!
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