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blindly
Jan 1, 2008 23:54:46 GMT -5
Post by jademoon on Jan 1, 2008 23:54:46 GMT -5
i knew a stranger rich and charming his parents never in the grave, but ghosts to visit the summer a shining bowl of gold time unfettered i thought you to be a gift a fallen star, shimmering lights of silver and white but your not noble, a captive to your envy i watched the beast of your crimes slaughter you the silver spoon of envy a graceless feast i thought i would arrive to my decision good-bye......but i never asked for the choice blind i sit in a field of ice,thought you would be my snow
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Post by thefragrant on Jan 2, 2008 6:05:57 GMT -5
Excellent one.....I loved it.... Bought meaning to words......
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blindly
Jan 3, 2008 15:39:23 GMT -5
Post by - Moirae - on Jan 3, 2008 15:39:23 GMT -5
Very interesting DOP narrative. Well developed story; thought out. I enjoyed reading.
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blindly
Jan 7, 2008 16:24:19 GMT -5
Post by bcoyotey on Jan 7, 2008 16:24:19 GMT -5
Hello Jade, This is a wonderful DOP poem. Great imagery. Lady B
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