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Post by danlindley ;0) on Mar 22, 2008 19:47:58 GMT -5
fireplace incense, splash candles, delicate green petal blossoms champagne fizz
i decide to flirt you sit I giggle We have
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aoeclald
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Post by aoeclald on Mar 23, 2008 0:20:57 GMT -5
Dan; what a fruitful write from the Drops! I love the descriptions of the romantic atmosphere that you pulled off in the first stanza. Just the use of nouns and no verbs give it a unique edge, but we are instantly drawn in to what you are describing.
The open-endedness of the last line is wonderful and I can only imagine what is had. The simple actions supported by the first stanza give this romantic scene some vivid life!
Great write, thanks for sharing!
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Post by ¤ Maeka Amanite ¤ (WD) on Mar 25, 2008 22:46:25 GMT -5
Love the imagery here that you painted with the Drops. I enjoyed reading it!
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Post by MidnightInEden on Mar 26, 2008 5:00:23 GMT -5
Sweet and simple - I liked the disconnected feel of this, like you were 'dropping' each line down carefully to add to the image. Well done Dan
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Post by matw63 on Aug 27, 2008 13:06:31 GMT -5
lol!! steamy drop, nicely done
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