RagazzaBell
Established Muse
"We're all immortal until we die."
Posts: 104
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Aug 31, 2005 11:18:44 GMT -5
Post by RagazzaBell on Aug 31, 2005 11:18:44 GMT -5
Death danced in awful glory. My body was cold with tears. My secret begged to be hidden, but I could not erase your embrace. What I fear has come while quietly you end your battle. This sickness now has won.
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AML
Aug 31, 2005 14:52:17 GMT -5
Post by lifes parody on Aug 31, 2005 14:52:17 GMT -5
awwww i like this. It's short and powerful. mmmmm very nice
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AML
Aug 31, 2005 17:06:22 GMT -5
Post by bravogirl on Aug 31, 2005 17:06:22 GMT -5
Wow, that was wrenching. Very gripping work.
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AML
Aug 31, 2005 18:41:27 GMT -5
Post by nester66 ~poetaster~ on Aug 31, 2005 18:41:27 GMT -5
Sad, made me think about someone with H.I.V.
What a sad poem. I am probably off the mark by a long shot but poetry is that way from time to time, isn't it? Glad to see your still around. This is the first I have seen of your recent poetry.
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RagazzaBell
Established Muse
"We're all immortal until we die."
Posts: 104
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AML
Aug 31, 2005 22:47:33 GMT -5
Post by RagazzaBell on Aug 31, 2005 22:47:33 GMT -5
Thank you, it was originally from the Drop of Poetry section
Technically its about Leukemia, but close enough right? I haven't been in this forum in awhile, been hanging around in Angst and Anger but I'll be back soon.
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blowupstall
Wandering Muse
what price do we pay to believe what we say ?
Posts: 44
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Sept 1, 2005 1:40:22 GMT -5
Post by blowupstall on Sept 1, 2005 1:40:22 GMT -5
Really good.
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