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Post by gormanda on May 21, 2008 19:26:35 GMT -5
We fizzed cordial champagne, splashed lipstick polish. We bloomed lit matches, candles flowing moody beauty, pouring incense blossoms. They shed shimmering poetry. I sipped the sap, fermented White bubble mist. and I wanted to be that lily. 1933.
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Post by ~agold on May 27, 2008 3:56:11 GMT -5
I loved the alliteration in the lines-
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Post by Astarael ~ Enduring on May 27, 2008 19:38:21 GMT -5
this had a light feel to it that i really enjoyed. "candles flowing moody beauty, pouring incense blossoms." those two lines were my favourite
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Post by ¤ Maeka Amanite ¤ (WD) on May 28, 2008 21:29:20 GMT -5
Different and interesting, I love how this turned out. I enjoyed reading this!
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Post by matw63 on Jul 24, 2008 14:52:11 GMT -5
yes i enjoyed this too. it definitely had a dreamy feel to it. good drop
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