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Post by €ereza|£inze on Jun 30, 2008 3:52:55 GMT -5
Diamond Rain
Pretty star in midnight mud I walk under the diamond rain Sneakers pretend to splash ocean My quiet music will echo Whisper, magic love And peace
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Post by tsu on Jul 1, 2008 9:37:45 GMT -5
sweet drop..loved how you used sneakers!..and really like the tranquil ending.. reminds me of the glastonbury festival!
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Post by bcoyotey on Jul 2, 2008 17:42:34 GMT -5
Very pretty Drops poem, linze. The imagery is amazing for such a short write. Lady B
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Post by iab on Jul 12, 2008 16:24:30 GMT -5
Very sweet, Linz! Loved it.
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Post by matw63 on Aug 3, 2008 7:56:59 GMT -5
linze - i picture somebody walking through evening rain, listening to their ipod/walkman with sounds and sights resonating in the wind... nice write
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