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Post by *Whisper* on May 21, 2007 16:36:08 GMT -5
I'm really sorry about whatever happened! This expresses a lot of emotion in very few lines. Nicely done!
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Post by *Whisper* on May 21, 2007 16:31:42 GMT -5
Very nice and well written. It has good imagery also! <3
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Post by *Whisper* on May 21, 2007 16:37:16 GMT -5
Absolutely amazing imagery. Great job with DOP!
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Post by *Whisper* on Nov 24, 2006 16:20:34 GMT -5
So sweet and beautiful. Great flow!
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Post by *Whisper* on Oct 10, 2006 19:15:44 GMT -5
thanks waterlily!
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Post by *Whisper* on Aug 13, 2006 17:46:32 GMT -5
Thanks MoiMoi and BC!
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Post by *Whisper* on Aug 6, 2006 11:42:30 GMT -5
city daffodil Paris soon to grow secret of sunlight shampoo
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TRUTH
Jul 24, 2006 15:10:23 GMT -5
Post by *Whisper* on Jul 24, 2006 15:10:23 GMT -5
Interesting.... powerful... Great work!!!
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Post by *Whisper* on Jul 24, 2006 15:09:44 GMT -5
Great wording and imagery and also a great flow!
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Post by *Whisper* on Jul 24, 2006 15:07:15 GMT -5
I love the language you used in this. Nice job!
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poem 2
Jul 24, 2006 15:06:41 GMT -5
Post by *Whisper* on Jul 24, 2006 15:06:41 GMT -5
Hmm.. made me think a lot; nice imagery!
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Post by *Whisper* on Jul 24, 2006 15:05:59 GMT -5
Great messages throughout. Great job!
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Post by *Whisper* on Jul 24, 2006 15:08:53 GMT -5
I know I can relate to this! Great job I love it!
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Post by *Whisper* on Jul 24, 2006 15:11:15 GMT -5
Hmm... interesting... not sure what I think of this one.... its very well written.
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Post by *Whisper* on Jul 22, 2006 7:34:17 GMT -5
Excellently written, I love this! Its odd; its almost like the mood changes between the beginning and the end. Thanks for sharing!
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Post by *Whisper* on Jul 21, 2006 4:44:23 GMT -5
Very true! Great job!
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Post by *Whisper* on Jul 24, 2006 15:12:46 GMT -5
I like how it goes really strong and then it softens. Nice work!
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Post by *Whisper* on Jul 24, 2006 15:11:55 GMT -5
This is beautiful! Very sad but very well written! I really enjoyed this!
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help
Jul 24, 2006 15:14:06 GMT -5
Post by *Whisper* on Jul 24, 2006 15:14:06 GMT -5
Someday it will pass. Great poem here!
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crushed
Jul 24, 2006 15:14:40 GMT -5
Post by *Whisper* on Jul 24, 2006 15:14:40 GMT -5
I do. Hang on there and everything will be alright. Thanks for sharing this!
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